August 26, 2011 Writing 34

Muscles burning, heart pounding, rounding that final curve. The finish line looms in sight, my enemy on my heels. Just one more push…

  Today’s Red Writing Hood prompt is short and sweet.

Write anything of your choice as a tweet. Use only 140 characters – including spaces.

What do YOU think this story is about?


34 Responses

  1. CDG says:

    I love the sense of high stakes in so few words.

  2. I feel that way every time I run. 😉

  3. TheKirCorner says:

    I don’t run, but I immediately thought of Childbirth, the only thing that threw me was the word “enemy” …but I loved everything about it.

    have you redone this blog again??? I really like it. 🙂

    • DM says:

      Yes. It might change again. I’m looking for….something. Clean lines, focus on my posts, professional look. This one doesn’t have as much flexibility but its a new wordpress theme, and I like it.

  4. jessicaanne12 says:

    I love the prompt this week! So much said in so few words. I love your choice of the word enemy instead of competitor, leads me to thinking running for his life instead of a race.

  5. Ash at Shades (@AshAtShades) says:

    Makes me think of a horse race. Which makes me want a mint julep.

    Love how so many scenarios are able to fit your words.

  6. aeliusblythe says:

    Arg–reminded me of cross country. Why did I ever think running to exhaustion was fun?

    Nice image shoved into so few words.

  7. Galit Breen says:

    Love the thrill of the race and seriously lady- love your new look!

  8. I was never a great long distance runner and always felt the descriptions you used when I had to do it. lol. Nicely done.

  9. Frelle says:

    love the determination and motivation in this! great job!

  10. logyexpress says:

    The finish line is never as close as it looks. Nice take on the prompt.

  11. Carrie says:

    Definitely felt it was a race. I thought human but horse works as well.

    I like the new look. But I don’t like having all the buttons and other stuff pushed to the bottom (hence why I haven’t gone that way ;))

  12. pauline says:

    first time here and love the blog layout. It’s awesome. your story in a tweet was incredible.

  13. Love the pacing and wanting more! :>

    • DM says:

      I’m hoping to bring more as one of the Bloggy Moms Writing Workshop prompts is to write from the POV of a horse in a horse show or race…

  14. Erin says:

    That is how I feel in the last 5 minutes of my work out, without someone behind me! Perfectly put in so few words!

  15. tuesday2 says:

    You just may have motivated me to put down my coffee cup (and my laptop) and head out for that overdue morning run!

    I’ll be back to visit-

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