Sugar and Spice

Sugar and Spice
September 13, 2012 4 Comments Writing Stephanie Ayers

“What are you doing?” Sylvia asked her mother, who was dancing around the kitchen chanting. She held jars of spices in her hand and more jars, these empty, were scattered across the counter.

“Mrs. Henderson wants a second child- a girl this time.” Her mother answered, adding more spices to the mound in front of her. Another dash of cinnamon and she stepped back, offering a tiny spoonful to Sylvia. “What do you think?”

Sylvia swooped in, savored. “Just a tad spicy,” she said.

Her mother smiled wickedly. “Good. That’s what that home wrecker deserves.”

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This week our word was “Cinnamon.”

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Stephanie Ayers A published author with a knack for twisted tales, Stephanie Ayers is the Executive Creative Director of OWS Ink, LLC, a community for writers and readers alike. She loves a good thriller, fairies, things that go bump in the night, and sappy stories. When she is not writing, she can be found in Creative Cloud designing book covers and promotional graphics for authors.
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  1. 4 Comments

    Carrie

    Hmmm…home wrecker? So Mrs. Henderson had an affair with Sylvia’s mother? Interesting way to get the gender you require 😉

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      SAM

      Did you mean father? I think I really like this story. Maybe it will develop into more. Its not apparent that she is concocting a baby with the spices and chants?

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        Carrie

        yes, I meant father. :p And I got that the spices were helping her with conception in general and with creating the temperament of the future child

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