In Time: A Sailing She Goes

In Time: A Sailing She Goes
August 30, 2012 10 Comments Writing Stephanie Ayers

This picks up immediately after The Escape.

Too quickly, Viola found that her kidnapping was far from an illusion as the air pirates tied her securely to the bow of their ship. They bound the ropes so tightly around her body, the only thing she could move was her head. At least she knew they didn’t intend to kill her or else they would have left her dangling, not caring if she plunged to the earth far below as they sailed the sky. She had no idea where they were going, but she knew that it wasn’t a place she wanted to be. He’d tricked her again.

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This week, Velvet Verbosity challenged us to take you on a road trip in just 100 words. I took my character on a road trip through the sky.

What’d you think? Please share your thoughts and constructive criticism in a comment.

Thanks for stopping by!!

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Stephanie Ayers A published author with a knack for twisted tales, Stephanie Ayers is the Executive Creative Director of OWS Ink, LLC, a community for writers and readers alike. She loves a good thriller, fairies, things that go bump in the night, and sappy stories. When she is not writing, she can be found in Creative Cloud designing book covers and promotional graphics for authors.
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    deanabo

    I love it that you leave me wanting more. Great writing.

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      SAM

      Thanks, deana. I’ m glad to see you are enjoying this one too.

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    Carrie

    is “he” Father Lee? He just keeps pissing her off 🙂

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    Tara R.

    This makes me think of her as a living figurehead on the pirates’ ship. Great descriptions.

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      SAM

      Yes!! That’s exactly what she was.

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    arcticwren

    Wow, what strong images! Nicely done.

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    Velvet Verbosity (@velvetverbosity)

    This is fun, and as others have said, “descriptive”. For some reason I feel compelled to push you on those descriptions. Stretch yourself, and really “show” (instead of tell). 100 words isn’t much to do this, but whatever next week’s challenge is, maybe really focus on just the description part. I only say this because I sense that you’ve got more in you, and I want to see it. 🙂

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      SAM

      I accept your challenge! 🙂

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