100 Word Song: Heavenly Day

100 Word Song: Heavenly Day
May 6, 2013 10 Comments Writing Stephanie Ayers

She looked up at me with amber eyes. We swayed slowly, gently to the music, lost in our own world. It was just the two of us, dancing together on the laminate flooring laid on the grass special for just this occasion. Elegantly we moved in circles around the dance floor, laughing in that way newlyweds did. Promises of forever revealed in that moment, of our dreams coming true.

She looked up at me with golden eyes. We swayed slowly, gently, back and forth, just the two of us for just this moment. Just me and my newborn baby girl.

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The challenge: write exactly 100 words based on the particular song. This week’s song was “Heavenly Day” by Patty Griffin.

I always welcome and appreciate honest feedback. Please share your thoughts in comment.

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Stephanie Ayers A published author with a knack for twisted tales, Stephanie Ayers is the Executive Creative Director of OWS Ink, LLC, a community for writers and readers alike. She loves a good thriller, fairies, things that go bump in the night, and sappy stories. When she is not writing, she can be found in Creative Cloud designing book covers and promotional graphics for authors.
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  1. 10 Comments

    troy P.

    So very powerful and poignant, wondering who actually was still around (or not) within the second stanza. Beautifully done SAM.

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      SAM

      Thanks, t. I’m hoping to see your Master Class piece this week? I miss your entries. New deadline is Tues 9 pm EST. 🙂

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        troy P.

        Confound it! I need to get to work then!

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          SAM

          I know you’ll come up with something brilliant.

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            troy P.

            Hahaha! Not without plagiarizing!

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            SAM

            ye of little faith. 😉

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    Carrie

    So sweet SAM. I love the repetition and the magical feel to this

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      SAM

      Thanks, Carrie!

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    stankmeaner

    Aw, I loved this 🙂

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    tua1992

    I thoroughly enjoy it when you break the identities of the characters at the end of your posts sometimes. So short and so sweet. 🙂

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